tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100209549572191202.post4086507562059570695..comments2007-11-08T10:21:35.794-08:00Comments on Under the sand: Shooting the messenger: The effects of violence against journalists in IraqLHOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16085074463201691236noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6100209549572191202.post-62236349271689969432007-09-27T10:21:00.000-07:002007-09-27T10:21:00.000-07:00I believe that this post is perfect for your major...I believe that this post is perfect for your major and interest. This issue really can a direct effect on you. I also commend you on a great job on linking the images to their original site, allowing the readers to obtain even more information on your researched topic.<BR/>There are a few missing elements I found while reading your post. In the first sentence, you may want to add a comma after "Reporters without Borders 203". I believe this will make the introductory sentence flower much nicer. Also, I did not find a reason why you linked the term "journalist" within your first paragraph. I followed the link and felt that the site didn't give me further information based on the linked word. <BR/>As far as the look of your post goes, you may want to bring the text up evenly with your first images. This, I believe, will enhance the overall look of your blog. There is also some odd spacing between the first and second paragraph of your first comment. Notice how there is an extra space between your paragraphs, whereas this one is missing that space.<BR/>In the first paragraph, I may have found a typo in the phrase "the rhetoric spewed over the internet my Islamic extremists." I believe you wanted to use the word "by" instead of "my" if I'm not mistaken.<BR/>I thought it was quite intriguing how you took such a strong stance against journalists carrying weaponry in the middle east, as it will further target them and could lead them to death. Furthermore, you brought in external information to further prove your point, which I thought was an excellent idea.<BR/>Your second comment however, deemed weaker than the first. Was there anything within the article you read that you disagreed with? <BR/>Overall, very informative and fitting for your blog.CAOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11653546280767493602noreply@blogger.com